Floundering

Save me

From the long lost echo

Of my imagination.

Let me rise to fall

And fall again and again

With inerrant grace

And carefully planned frustration. 

Let me be

As I once was

So that I can find the me 

Here.

The me now

Lest the Heaven and Earth

Suffocate me

And I drown.

~Ice

Sept.14,2010

11:54pm

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

You always have a great depth to your poems and wonderful detail. the last stanza makes this poem deep.

[Bette]

i think some times we all forget who we are and what makes us ...well us. well done