The Darkness

Floating in a dark abyss

Silence pulls me under

Cradling,tugging, pushing

Until I can't tell which

Way is up anymore.

The vibrant nothingness

Quiets my screams.

 

I can feel it coming for me.

Reviews

[The Message]

The space before the final line is a brilliant touch, the impact is perfect.

[Art Sun]

Poetic...there is an emotional questioning of that silent scream...to be within darness and only feel the loudness of the unknown is to feel...afraid...nice work on this poem...