Sea Song

Something Light and flowy about how love catches you sometimes even when you don't want it to.

The breath of air

That you sighed

Breathed calm

into the calamity of

Long depths at sea.

And I,

Solitary I

Let you breathe

Love

Into me.

Author's Note

I wrote this a while ago...I just figured out how to end it.

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

it reminds me of scuba driving. I love this poems. I like the flow. The ending is wonderful

[Gregory H.]

After rereading this it caught me differently...It is also interesting how even when looking for love, it finds you when you least expect it.

[NataRose]

i like the happy feeling inside it, you could try and make the poem more smooth. Other than that, it's perfect, I love the idea.

[Gregory H.]

Very interesting. It has a joyous feeling to it. Could be written better. Nice ending though..