New Year

Night tapers down

After firework candycane

Impressions of laughter

Drift and fall

From the sky

Like the feather

Of a dove.

Reviews

[Thunderlyrics]

I agree with the comment below...very nice flow..amidst the chaos of ending fireworks...there is peace!

[The Message]

This almost sounds haiku-inspired, with the succinct lines and imagery. I like it, it's pretty unique.