Short

Short

A Poem by ICE

Sighing

As the world

Falls down

Around me

Locked in

Neverending

Apathy

The end

© 2009 ICE


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Interesting. Slightly depressing but that's not a bad thing. I liked everything except the last line, but that's only my opinion. I really liked the flow, it was short but it had a certain rhythm to it. Well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Added on October 22, 2009

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I'm a brooding poet who has been writing since middle school. My writing has a tendency of being rather dark...and I like it that way. I am female who is 20 years old and I'm currently in colle.. more..

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