Red Mirror

Just me rambling on...

Carry away this...

 

I'm Dead inside.

Fill my head with

Needless lies.

 

Take this...

 

You take that

Mirror Down,

Look me in

Eyes spent and

Rip this

Heart out.

 

Kill this

Urge to

Crash.

 

Rocking to and

Fro

Like leaves

On trees.

Red December and

Thieving thieves.

 

Resolution's no solution

Just an easy afterthought

After the sun's gone down.

Reviews

[*~Poetic_Essence~*]

I think your flow in this poem makes it easy to read and relate to. I love the word use as well..its simple but says so much with just a few words..I like how u use mirror in the middle part of the poem and then red towards the end..your title is what captured me and I think you tied it in well..I really enjoyed the whole thing. great write...

I love this stanza:
"Take this...
You take that
Mirror Down,
Look me in
Eyes spent and
Rip this
Heart out."

Well From One Word-Play Poet To The Next...Always Remember To Write With Your Heart!

[Helen Renee]

wonderful flow i love it! i can really relate

[THE LOST ROSE]

I love the creative simplistic approach. A ramble that came cross awesome. If I could flow like this my soon to be released poetry book would be extra special. I just don't have it like that. I enjoyed. I hope you keep rambling and sending me read request of your rambles.

[Winter McPherson]

Well, you ramble quite well......it comes out beautifully!

[The Message]

"Thieving Thieves"... very Claudio of you, hehe. I like this.