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dark and light

Flowing, my heart dies

And I'm left without hope for another day.

Empty, here I lie

And i'm frozen to the bone

Sorrowful, i am left with the aching life,

And the cold dark night.

Alone, I am the "horseman of death"

And I have come.

Beyond, I am your worst nightmare

And you know its true.

I am what you made me,

And I am what you've become.

 

No matter how many times you shatter the mirror,

Our reflections are one.

You can't run,

And I can't hide.

We will always be side by side.

I the darkness,

And you my light.

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

This is amazing.. I found it deeply moving actually.. dark and light meets.... like daily lives flow and conjoin from night and day!!! I like your ending:

No matter how many times you shatter the mirror,
Our reflections are one.
You can't run,
And I can't hide.
We will always be side by side.
I the darkness,
And you my light

Like the days each need the other..it is also a true metaphor to being human as both darkness and light exist in all people! Thank you for sharing!!! =)

[Jetta Zippora]

This is so beautiful! I love the emotion and power in this write! Fantastic job, friend!

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a powerful write, well writen

[sara]

This is amazing.

The concept of it is so real and the words and the way it's written so beautifully thought out.

=)

[Cherry Berry]

This is a haunting piece. Your flow is amazing. Well penned. Almost a dream of sorts, and possibly the self loathing of one indivdual penned down very romanticlly. Well done. I can take this poem several ways.
xox
Cherri

[Matthew Paul]

Without one, there is no other.
So true- we are all one and the same.

I like your style of creation here, and your thoughts represent the same view as mine; people are collective.

Nice.