I Watched You Watch Me.

I Watched You Watch Me.

A Poem by IcYLuVa
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We've all felt it, we've all seen that someone's heart break right in front our eyes. And it hurts.

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I Watched You Watch Me

I Watched You Watch Me,

I saw 'the look' in your eyes,

I saw you smile,

I heard you laugh,

And then I watched you sigh.


I Watched Your Shoulders Sag,

Your smile fade away,

The laughter stopped,

And in your eyes I saw the hidden pain.


I Turned Away And Listened,

As you cried out my name.

I heard your heart rip apart,

And I knew I was to blame.

© 2012 IcYLuVa


Author's Note

IcYLuVa
So this poem might be finished, it might not be! I'd really like some constructive criticism, and if you could tell me if it feels finished or not that'd be great! :)

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Added on September 22, 2012
Last Updated on September 22, 2012
Tags: Pain, Romance, Hurt, Watching you watch me

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Well, Hi! :) My name is Kennedy and I love writing poems (: It's my escape from the world, kinda. Anyways, i'm not so good with sharing my poems in person, so i'm hoping maybe this will help that fear.. more..

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