Honest and Truly

These three words mean a lot to me, and I think I have sufficiently expressed that through this poem :) I hope you enjoy!

Honest and Truly,
Those three simple words.
Would have made my life so much more simpler.
If they'd never been heard.

 

Honest and Truly,
"Yes, I like you."
Honest and Truly.
"Well, I like you too."

 

As Time goes on,
That fragile 'like'
Fuses into something more.
That like has changed,
To a love that was never there before.

 

Honest and Truly,
"Yes, I love you."
Honest and Truly,
"Well, I love you too."

 

As Time goes on,
That fragile 'Love'
Quietly disappears.
The thing that was once your whole life.
Now is nowhere near...

 

We Gradually forget,
And Gradually move on.
Until that someone comes again.
That someone who was once your whole life.
Now barely knows your name.

 

Honest and Truly,
"Yes, I know you"
Honest and Truly,
"Well, I don't know you."

 

Honest and Truly,
Those three simple words.
Have Changed my life forever
Now that they've been heard...

Reviews

[Criss ;)]

This could be a nice and nice one song if you try to think in this way too.. i liked this one much even you made my evening by this wonderful write...
have this 100/10 :)

[IcYLuVa]

Thank you! I'm afraid i'm not much of a song writer, but thanks for your input! :)

[Somebrownnerd]

Pleasant read, I really enjoyed how used repetition; It was almost like the slight changes made in a repeating chorus of a song. The message is something we can all empathize with as well, sure love is amazing in so many facets, but do we truly want to expose our hearts? Looking forward to more of your work.

[IcYLuVa]

Wow, thank you so much!!! That really means so much to me :) Thank you for taking the time to comment and read. I really appreciate it :)

[Mr Alednac]

Oh wow, this is really spectacular and everyone could relate to it, I know I do. Honestly and truly are words that have had both positive and negative feelings and you captured that brilliantly. I also like the bold sentences in the stanzas which add more effect. Great poem and thank you for posting it. :)

[IcYLuVa]

Thank you for taking the time to read! (: I wrote this about a friend and I, we'd always tell each other 'Honest and Truly' when we would make promises, or try to convince the other of something (: I'm very glad you could relate! Thank you for your review! I really appreciate it! (:

[Sami Khalil]

that fragile love... Well penned.

[IcYLuVa]

Thank you and thanks for your review(:

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome