Why Did you Destroy?

Why Did you Destroy?

A Poem by LordxPain
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A poem about my current family life right now. It's not going so well and it's kind of rough waters. Please know that this poem is about divorce and seperation of loved ones.

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"Why Did You Destroy?"
By: Ian Koterwski

When we part paths what will you think?
What will you do with yourself?
What ties us together, and why did we care?

What did we do wrong?
What can we learn?
What did we share, and why did it burn?

Our lives are a shambles,
Our streets are bare.
That is why i ask, "Why did you destroy our lives
If you really did care?"

© 2009 LordxPain


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Really good poem. I could feel some of the pain you are having to deal with in real life. Good job.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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LordxPain
LordxPain

La Crosse, WI



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I'm just a average guy. I'm working towards psychology and love to write. We'll just have to wait to see what gets made. Hehe... all--riiight. OH! Giggity. Please remember i am NOT a professional. I'm.. more..

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