The Bars of Life

The Bars of Life

A Poem by LordxPain
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Dedicated to the two women being detained in North Korea... Someone please bring them home u_u

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"The Bars of Life"
By: Ian Koterwski

We suffer for no cause,
We labor for our bread.
Knowing what they say we did,
We'll probably end up dead.

I pray democracy can save us now,
For if not our act will take its final bow.
We're innocent and lively
And deserve to be set free,
This is our last and final decree,
Oh save us, God or Democracy!

© 2009 LordxPain


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Simply amazing. Very strong and very detailed yet short. Another excellent work. Can't wait to read more.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow...it's a cry, but with doubts, hopes, fears, and prayers. You have a talent for conveying a power message, with few words.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

God Save them!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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LordxPain
LordxPain

La Crosse, WI



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I'm just a average guy. I'm working towards psychology and love to write. We'll just have to wait to see what gets made. Hehe... all--riiight. OH! Giggity. Please remember i am NOT a professional. I'm.. more..

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