Silent Love

Silent Love

A Poem by LordxPain

"Silent Love"
By: Ian Koterwski

We cast our gaze to the one in sight,
Feeling nothing but love in flight.
We can not help but stop and stare,
at the one's halo of light.

We try and make our fatefull move,
Creeping along to an unknown doom.
We see them take another's hand,
And walk along to their "Neverland"

Alone and dark are now our days,
Forever trapped in that lover's gaze.

© 2009 LordxPain


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Wonderful contrast of the happiness of being with a lover, put together with the insecurities, and doubts of the unknown.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Added on June 11, 2009

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LordxPain
LordxPain

La Crosse, WI



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I'm just a average guy. I'm working towards psychology and love to write. We'll just have to wait to see what gets made. Hehe... all--riiight. OH! Giggity. Please remember i am NOT a professional. I'm.. more..

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