"What I Wish For"

Kara may have posted this, but I am the original creator of this poem

"What I Wish For"
By: Ian Koterwski
You say that I am nothing,
You refer to me as scum,
You promise to be there for me,
Yet you never come.

I search the world far and wide,
to tell my twisted tale,
But this my friend I am afraid,
I will set just one more sail.

I search and search for happy eyes,
but all I see is a maze.
Alone and dark for all i see,
Is that evil gaze.

Hate me not for I am man,
And destroy my message sent,
For even if you hate my soul
I await for the bright night's end.

Reviews

[Kara]

I think it conveys your feelings really well. It's dark, but hopeful. You're waiting for a chance, that life just hasn't seemed to give you yet. This is very well put together, and you did a great job. I love the images it creates, and how vivid a picture it paints for those who read it. I think you have a talent for poetry, Ian. I just hope you find what your looking for. Please remember, your not alone anymore. Though it can feel that way sometimes. Your day will come.

- Kara

[LordxPain]

Thank you Kara. I thuroughly enjoyed creating this poem and i wish for others to do the same. Everyone's day will come wheter we believe or not. That is why i will continue my work.

Thanks again,
Ian