IF I DIE DREAMING(REMEMBER ME)

He will die today
Anyone who do not believe in tomorrow
Tho' we are soaked in today's sorrow
I want to be remembered by the things I say.



Slave of mortal's fate
Remember me like I live in everyone's face
Remember me if tomorrow comes
But if tomorrow never come
Please don't forget me today



Remember me
Say you will remember me
Remember me even if I die dreaming
Tho' I barely sleep.

Reviews

[Ioana Georgiana]

The fear of being forgotten is all too common. This poem "runs" deep. I would even dare to compare it to Beyonce's "I Was Here", to a certain extent.

[IamRealTusoul]

Thank you for the comment dear

[harlem_knight]

this is deep! "remember me like i live in everyln's face" powerful line.

[IamRealTusoul]

Thanks brother...

[Ashley Arita]

This is a very sad and deep poem. It really captures the feeling of desperation. Maybe add some more similes and metaphors and it will become a pretty good poem.

[IamRealTusoul]

Thank you dear, I really appreciate.

[Ashley Arita]

No problem!