Nature's Splendour

Lofty white clouds towering over
The sunny mountain like a soft cover
Standing tall against the winter showers
Flourishing like summer flowers

Halting over the valiant valley of snow
Where the sun sparkle with moderate glow
Applauding the elegance of nature's splendour
Human heart salutes nature in sheer wonder

Reviews

[Jessica Lima]

Man! this one is rich in imagery. I can see what you describe so clearly... as if I was there. :) lovely

[barleygirl]

Knowing that you live at the base of the world's highest & most remote mountains, I can almost see how it must be & how it feels to have these majestic sentinels living nearby. Your poem expresses all the ways I've imagined the Himalayas & the powerful essence they must impart to your part of the world. Excellent job writing about a unique view . . . (((HUGS)))

[emmajoy]

You've painted such beautiful scenes. leading this reader's thought outdoors and into what truly is a winter-world's splendour. Wonderfully phrased, delightfully visual.

[Ted Kniffen]

How many times do we look at a scene like this, but never really see it. Sometimes we are blinded by beauty. This is one of those times.

On a grammatical note, 'sparkle' needs to be plural 'sparkles'.

and perhaps drop the connective in the third line.
'Standing tall against the winter showers'
to
'Standing tall against winter showers'

Minor points really.
Well done, Dhiman. Good write.

[EcstaticEuphoria]

Beautiful! Great prose that makes me wanna get outside and "solute nature's splendor" myself. Thanks for sharing!

[Isabella Ivy]

A pretty picture and sweet to the soul :) I.I.

[maissa]

nice flow and rhythm . the choice of words and metaphors is stunning . loved every verse and every word ..
you could actually feel the breeze of air touching your skin
short but did the job .. maybe you could make it a little bit longer so it can be more enjoyable

[MsJewel]

You have created some lovely images for the reader, but more than that, the softness of your words drew me in. Beautiful writing :) Julie

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Inject Positivity,
Dhiman, Your poem speaks the reality of how our hearts are somehow attracted to the life message of nature's beauty. Why does the person love to revel in "lofty white clouds towering over." or sun sparkle with moderate glow;" Yes you closing line proves how we are fit from the imprint of God within our souls to appreciate what the Lord has made! "Human heart salutes nature in sheer wonder." So beautiful and inspiring!........Hope things are going well for you in your neck of the woods...............Bless you and yours........................Kathy

[jacob erin-cilberto]

bringing the inanimate to life....you did that here...