Glimpses Of You

I called your name through my old voice
But you seemed to have lost me in the noise
I have seen your glimpses in the mountain
Dancing in your own rhythm under the fountain
Where the little sparrows take their morning dip
And the sun rays humming your name in their lip

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

inject Positivity,
How winsome this. I can hear the motivation to connect with the once familiar and known. "I called your name through my old voice."
Then past familiar has faded, "seemed to have lost me in the noise."
Although gone surely not forgotten "your glimpses in the mountain..dancing in your own rhythm under the fountain."
The lighthearted joy of memories never replaced but your own to retain "where the little sparrows take their morning dip..and the sun rays humming your name in their lip."
This is amazing for the drawing power of God's creation is the place of healing and thoughts process. Lovely poem.
bless you. kathy

[Farmgirl]

Very beautiful Dhiman !!!

[horizon]

When we give ourselves to a person but don't get the same feeling in return then it hurts...we keep on thinking ant that person...

[Tessa Melendez]

A nice simple rhyming piece. I wonder who you're speaking of? Is it God? You make me think so by saying "But you seem to have lost me in the noise/I've seen your glimpses in the mountain." Very good job, friend. I apologize for not reviewing in awhile.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Usually these glimpses drive one crazy.. Especially when you don't really want to miss someone..
This is beautifully penned!

[Papaya]

when we miss someone, signs of them are everywhere

[Shannon]

This feels like a mixture between your vintage works and your sadness. I feel like this isn't quite complete, yet.

But it's beautiful.

[lua]

this is so powerful, a portrayal of how people change and move on yet against their will and nothing, no amount of pretending to be their old selves can one rekindle this connection

[jrc]

Knock, knock!
Who's there?
Glimpses of You.
Glimpses of you who?

Glimpses of You, my life has changed, thank you for the love and the joy you bring...

hehe just a knock-knock joke lol

[Hope514x]

what i love about this is, it includes nature and i find poetry with nature so appealing especially when combined with a lover