Birth Of The Sky

The sky opens its eyes in fun
To the joyous love of mother earth
Guided and supported by brother sun
Like a child taken care of after birth

Flowery plants bloomed through the night
With songs of happiness in their heart
They welcomed the sky to a new sight
And wished her well for a brand new start

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Dhiman,
I am reading your lovely poem "Birth of the Sky", one of your earlier writings. This poem is a wonderful and light romp of joy to the heart of mankind.Oh I like how you connect the young innocence of childhood's view of life in your poem! That is how the beauty of nature's always changing moods, contrasts and sounds makes this heart feel. "The sky opens its eyes in fun." to the "flowery plants bloomed through the night." and "songs of happiness in their heart." Uplifting lilt of a poem! Blessings always as you find and look for the real and true joy in life................Kathy

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s written by a grateful heart and creative mind. Two wondrous combinations creating a life...this life, a beautiful poem :)

[Ella]

One of the reasons i read poetry is because it gives me a different perspective. I enjoy seeing the world through others eyes. Great poem.

[Nessly]

Short and sweet write, Dhiman! I love the imagery here. It reminds me of what looking at something sublime feels like... It's kind of like wading as far out into the ocean as you can before you no longer feel the sand between your toes, then looking at the seemingly endless horizon. Those moments always take my breath away, putting me in a state of awe.

[Cattleya]

this was wonderful it kind of took me back to my child hood its like being wrap in a warm blanket very beautiful

[Inject Positivity]

I'm glad my poem was able to portray something like that for you... Thank you for your visit frnd...

[costa siwale]

Poetic, short, beautiful...incredible piece. enjoyed this

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Beautiful poem, imagery and story! I liked the rhyming too. I like how you put it into a a family instead of saying just Mother nature. Tyfs!

[Lorry]

Beautifully captured my friend. Each day can be our brand new start, if only we looked hard enough at our actions that have failed previously, instead of making the same mistakes over and over. I have missed your words. Glad to see your pen still flows beautifully.

[Inject Positivity]

Thank you Nemo, thank you for reaching out in my darkest days, I'm slowly slowly getting back to life again... Always humbled to read your appreciative words frnd...

[Shannon]

Dhiman,

This is beautiful. With your signature personification.

But this line resonates the most:
"wished her well for a brand new start"

"new starts" especially after darkness can be difficult. Important to welcome the light, wherever we can find it.

[Inject Positivity]

When you wrote this review I know you reflected your affection and blessings for me, thank you for being such a wonderful frnd and sister... Being able to write again is itself an amazing feeling... I am looking forward to see the light again...

[GreenShoes]

This is a very lovely poem, Dhiman. Unusual concept, "birth of the sky," and it was perfectly rhymed. Well done, indeed. :)

[Inject Positivity]

Thank you Karen, poetry dances with unusual things isn't it? Thank you for your kind words frnd...