Black Pen

Oh Black Pen! Thou should never stop bleeding
When my heart speak of freedom and humanity
Thou must serve passion in my soul
To reveal the truth of life and it's goal
Thou have written words of love,
Words that carried sadness of life
Yet you never found your feet
Until you have written those words
Words that were longing to come out of your head
Speaking of the beauty of nature, and freedom
Speaking of those unspoken people
Who rarely got the chance to speak
For them you have become a sword
To speak of their pain through your inkdrops
Oh Black Pen! I ask you not to stop bleeding
Not until I write with you my last words of life
Even if the tiny raindrops of life
Wash away your dark inkdrops
Through the narrow streets of mortality
Leaving a trace of your presence in my diary

Reviews

[AnayaJ.]

Wow. This is truly a wonderful poem highlighting the power of pen, certainly mightier than a sword and shines light upon the power of words. Nice one :)

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Dhiman,
I have been visiting people's early writings and now I have come to say hi to one of yours! This is a cool one too. the idea of using a black ink pen as platform or stage to the entrance of life experience really works! So many lines really caught me so I'll just share one that I liked. "Yet you never found your feet..speaking of those unspoken people who rarely got the chance to speak....a sword to speak of their pain through your ink drops and ...oh black pen! I ask you not to stop bleeding. ..Intense, deep and so human in contrast of dark and light; both hopeless and vulnerable. Blessings as always in life, work and writing ........................Kathy

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The ever powerful and mighty. The greatest weapon we have is words.

[Erika]

Writing can be, as you say, a sword - to speak for those whose voice is silenced and to speak the words we have inside. I like this poem!

[Cattleya]

this was amazing sometimes I get stuck written poems but after this beautiful one I know I can do it

[Inject Positivity]

You absolutely can my frnd... Thank you for your kind words on my poem...

[Dust That Drifts Throug..]

This is one of my favorite poems. Ii really like the last two lines: "Through the narrow streets of mortality
Leaving a trace of your presence in my diary."

[Akansha]

This is a beautiful piece! :)
A pen indeed is a sword for many of us.

[Annabelle]

This poem was amazing. Kudos to you. Poetry can be so difficult to write. This is so powerful.

[Inject Positivity]

Thank you frnd, poetry is indeed powerful, it can help a burning heart to light up a page... Thank you for your kind visit, I will soon look at your works...

[Xxxxxx]

Omg, love this poem! A black pen can save lives. A black pen can be tears, hearts and minds. A black pen is a savior of emotional mental breakdowns.

[Inject Positivity]

Thank you frnd. A pen can save a life, it can build lives and bring passion of a heart on pages... Thank you for your kind words...

[Tabby Mac]

Great poem! I love the word bleeding! Very powerful and thoughtful! I like how you personified the pen!
Tabby