One Star, One Planet

Collaboration: two visions

Golden gleam sparks upon earth's life
Bestowing warmth upon all it lights

A silent peace in incandescent sky 
Birds spreading wings take flight

Sunbeams bathing in morning's river
Breezes echoing the starfilled night

First rays paint the horizon
A sliver of yellowed bright

Touches of sunlight sparkle darkening air
A living vision made to dazzle and stun

Flares shine solely on heavens not earth
Hints of illumination from a falling sun

Serenity overwhlems with specatular brilliance
As the end of day is completely done

Purple hues fad to black as the
Final glint retreats, night has begun

Skies sleep in a bed of stars
Or wake in the care of light

One star, one planet,
Two visions as one

Author's Note

We took Inject Positivitiy's way with lyrical words and natural wonder, combined them with S. Mi's penchant for wrangling words into a concept...this is the result. You will find the same work on both pages.

Reviews

[Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn..]

I must say that I did truly enjoy this nature inclined philosophical read ... Thank you so much for sharing ...

Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn de Graham

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Dhiman,
You just shine! Your open and spontaneous free form beauty is so winsome. It is held within actual rhyme which is very special. All I can say is my tired heart needed this foray into your expression of "One Star, One Planet." Fitting words for God's Creation...........
Blessings as always. Kathy

[Sydney]

I really love the last two lines of the poem. The imagery throughout paints a beautiful picture. great job!

[hcarson]

I enjoyed this, a good combination of two different writers and styles managing to mix as one, well done 😀

[MandaBear]

This is really cool. You guys did a great job! Awesome work

[Inject Positivity]

So sweet of you Manda, thank you so much for appreciating our work...

[kenza salmi]

Amazing ! I really love it ...By the way you are a talented person ! I liked the selection of vocabulary in this poem...Wish you all the best .Keep it up

[Inject Positivity]

Thank you frnd... God bless you...

[kenza salmi]

you are the most welcome :) thanks

[Amber]

I really enjoyed the poetic language and description

[Inject Positivity]

Thank you so much for your visit Amber... Pleasure to see you on my page...

[Cor]

I really enjoyed this. You painted a great picture for my mind. I could see the rays peeking through the trees and shining through the river. Great job!

P.S. There's a typo here with fade.
"Purple hues fad to black as the
Final glint retreats, night has begun "

[Inject Positivity]

Wow! Thank you Cor for your kind visit and comments... I'm glad you enjoyed and visualized our poem's depth... Oops I will edit it soon... Thank you frnd...

[Cor]

No problem. :D It happens to the best of us.
And you are so very welcome! Thank you for sharing.

[Sheila Kline]

My compliments to the two of you for presenting to us this wonderful union of thoughts! My favorite lines are: Skies sleep in a bed of stars Or wake in the care of light. Your poem creates a vision that is pleasing to the spirit as it provides beauty and comfort!

[Inject Positivity]

What an encouraging review!!! Thank you so much for kind compliments for us, it means a lot... Thank you so much...

[DeerInHeadlights]

I felt comforted.. and warm reading this..

[Inject Positivity]

Thank you so much for your gracious visit dear frnd...