Little Worries

Little Worries

A Poem by ~Juliette~
"

There was no song option D:

"
Now, please tell me if I'm being to blunt a little too forward
yeah it maybe a little much
but please baby
I'm just tryin to get the truth out
out of those heavily locked doors
oh well
better find a different route
I've being tryin to do this for so long
I forgot what is feels like to like someone else
yeah a school girls crush is what im missin'
Do I have your attention now?
Alright listen;
n' you,
my friend
one of my past lovers
tried to shut me out, forget about me, forget about our past,
well I'm telling you baby, I aint goin' no where fast
I'm here to stay until you let me me, so please baby
don't throw me in the rubbish bin
uh, yeah, like what you've tryina do all along, well honey,
let me tell you by the time I finish this im gunna be long gone.
Why,babe, why, you never sought me out
never gave me a chance 
never tried it again
well, I guess, theres nothing I can do now
its in fates hands
no use beggin when all you ever do is turn me down
shut me out
forget about me;
what we had, what went wrong
Try and write a new story
Hate to tell you but the one who was right for you has been here all along

What about that time in the rain when you held me close, told me that you'd never leave again?
Well, what that memory has brung has been nothing but pain and desire
Desire and pain
both not healthy, but vital for survival, isnt that what love is?
Desire for someone
only to feel pain
whats the point of love if you dont live?
Whats the point of livin' if you dont love?

© 2011 ~Juliette~


Author's Note

~Juliette~
Tis a bit choppy, i am aware, and ends very abruptly. Tell me what you think :)
**Changes made**

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There was no song option for the genera thinggy, Cass. I didnt know what else to put it as. somehow, 'stort' doesnt fit :P and I will make the change

Posted 13 Years Ago


Just a couple errors you should be aware of (not that big):
"I forgot what is feels like toi like someone else"; toi should be to.

And if you have this as a poem, maybe just use the full words instead of "tryin" and instead of "'n" it should be and. But if you want this as a rap, like you said to me, then you should move it to a different category (if you can).

But I really enjoyed this poem because I got what you were trying to say. You never told me the story behind it but I think it might have to do with Tyler or Cole? I'm not sure.

Keep writing babe. :)

~ * Pessimistic Insanity * ~

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on July 31, 2011
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~Juliette~
~Juliette~

Edmonton, Canada



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