How Strong Are You Now?

How Strong Are You Now?

A Poem by Arianna Woods
"

RIP Patrick

"

Seven minutes since we kissed goodbye

Seven minutes since you smiled at me

Seven minutes since you left my car

Seven minutes, seven minutes too far

 

Twenty minutes 'til they said "he's gone"

The time it takes to make that one phone call

Twenty minutes in an ambulance

Is twenty minutes, twenty minutes too long

 

Three days for me to fall apart

Waking up believing the phone ringing was you

Three days and twenty minutes to cry when it was

Somebody else

 

[Nothing's supposed to happen

When our backs are turned

But the strong are heartless

And the weak get burned]

 

Seven minutes and the world can change

Seven minutes, is seven minutes

Too late

© 2008 Arianna Woods


Author's Note

Arianna Woods
I miss you, Patrick. Rest in peace.

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Sad. Touching and very moving

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wow...this was such an emotional piece. Well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I am also sorry for your loss, it is tough when you lose someone you really care about. A nice tirbute to Patrick.

Posted 16 Years Ago


I'm so sorry for your loss, I lost my son in a tragic car accident last year so I can relate to your heartache. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Arianna Woods
Arianna Woods

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