Our Poem

Right over here,

Your hands gesture.

Never give up,

Your father's lecture.

 

Blue and green,

Your eyes so deep.

Tears stroll along,

You weep and weep.

 

Our love flies away,

It flies high.

Lets hold hands,

And watch the clouds cry.

 

You watch in confusion,

I stare and stare.

You don't answer,

She doesn't care.

 

You cry, I try to help.

I still love you.

Author's Note

Ignore spelling. I was really tired when I wrote this.

Reviews

[Cupcake]

Aw I love you Rinuuhhh bear! I really appreciate that : ). I think you have the UBER BEST EXTREMLY DESCRIPTIVE BEST UBER UBER UBER UBER UBER UBER UBER GREATTTT writing in the whole entire world :D. And , uhm no. I'm UGLY, your so prettyyyy!!!

And Yes, : ) I know.


I luff you!!!
~~~~ stay cool cool cat
LOVE<
CUPCAKE>

[Marina]

"Lets hold hands,
And watch the clouds cry."

How about best 2 lines in the history of lines? How about a beautiful poem. I really, totally, X-TREMLEY love this. You don't even understand your writing talent. This is a beautiful poem, written by a beautiful girl.

Don't second guess yourself, Meg. You are the nicest person i've met in my life.

I love you! :D :3 :)
If you ever need to talk, i'm here. Just thought i'd let you know that. (i know. I'm being cheesy. But seriously (and i'm never serious), i won't judge. No matter what.)

XxStaySweet/Gold/Amazing (or else),
Rina

[Weaza]

Aw its adorable. It has meaning and passion I love it Zetzu! Continue Writing!

~Weaza~

[Cupcake]

aw hahah thank you : )

[Smile It's Megan&hearts..]

Its so cute. I absolutely love it Meg! :]