A Bug

It's a bug it's a slug very deep in my brain. No time for fun no time to play I really need to get away. it hurts it's pain that won't go away please help please rescue I need to escape.

Reviews

[♥(heatherawesome..]

wierd that is kool for a start and maby you should do more

[Tara♥Undefined&h..]

weird but kewl! like it a lot Issac!!!! Write more

[Mary]

i liked it maybe you should make it longer or something, u r good for being a new writer:)

[Thomas Fleet]

I like it and think the rhyme and outline is good, but you should work on the structure.