The Cycle

11/03/17

From me 

To we 

To me 

Again 

      From two

      To three

      Not me

      Again 

            From we

            To me

            Just me

            Again.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice flow of words and thoughts. I liked the movement leading to the logical ending. Thank you Ayisha for sharing the amazing words and thoughts.
Coyote

[emipoemi]

I couldn't help but sing "Alone Again" as I read this poem. It's short and bittersweet, and the way it flows is great. Much enjoyed! Well done!

[Lorry]

A self explanatory autobiography in 21 words? Now that is impressive.
Uhm...gobsmacked, speechless. Well done :)

[Cadel]

I've never in my life spent so much time pondering so few words. I like this a lot.

[Ayisha Upshaw]

That is a huge complement!
I contemplated adding a footnote description but decided against it.

[Cadel]

No, don't, it would take away from what it is by itself.

[Wanaka]

This is so sad and touching, It's almost like a Bittersweet. Keep up the good work!

[Ayisha Upshaw]

Thank you!