To my sister and maa

if I die tommorow
like my daddy just did
don't shed a single tear for me
just remember my smiling face
my funny jokes
and how we used to kid
and just for a while
you'll feel better
and so I'll feel better

if i die tommorow
dont grief so long
make this poem a song
so when you think of me
you just sing it along
and if the moment passing by
remind you of me
let me tell you i was blessed
to have your love to infinity

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

For one so young this seems very morbid but I guess with the recent death of your father death and life are uppermost in your thoughts. You capture a sombre but 'so what' tone in reassuring your loved ones.

One typo you may wish to address:
if i die tommorow
dont grieve for so long