The silent night

In the silence of a lonely night;
I think of the secrets,
the clouds can hide;
even the moon,
in its glory so bright;
couldn't reveal the untold lies.
Nor the stars that hide,
their shining light;
the unuttered abstruse,
failed to be testified!

Author's Note

do i need to work on my grammer?
punctuation and such

Reviews

[AJNJ]

Nope. Your English is fine and I dont particularly care about punctuation on a website like this. Its the message that wasn't very clear to me. And that worries me.