Why They Deserve More Than We

Why They Deserve More Than We

A Poem by That.Misfit.
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A poem written by me, inspired by Edgar Allen Poe's 'Annabel Lee' with a couple excerpts. [Excerpt and idea credit all go to him.] It explains that I think the couple deserved much more than us.<3

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Annabel Lee,
May have lived in a kingdom by the sea,
Be we?
No such place is in need,
For none have us has done such a deed,
As to deserve a palace, as the perfect and beautiful Annabel Lee,
He was a child and she was a child,
In that kingdom by the sea;
They deserved no less than love,
He and his Annabel Lee,

Yet then the wind went about and chilled and killed,
His Annabel Lee,
But he kept his hope,
And his loyalty,
To be with she,
Which is why they deserved far more than we,
He and his Annabel Lee.

© 2013 That.Misfit.


Author's Note

That.Misfit.
I'm only 15 guys. Be honest but, if its horrible, not murderous, k? Thanks :3 Bye
-That.Misfit.

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Added on January 11, 2013
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