Blueridge Sunset

A beautiful evening around my area.

Sun setting softly to end this beautiful day
Stunning colors of red and orange.
Across the horizon they paint the sky.
Atop the mountains a firey glow.
This night will end I surely know.
I would watch forever if it did not go.
Almost gone to bed for the night.
Behind the mountains falling out of sight.
Vibrant colors so tense and true.
Soon fall below mountains of blue.
I love this place where I call home.
Blueridge mountains is where I roam.
Sun is set I say goodnight.
May we meet again another night.

Reviews

[AliciaB]

Beautiful! My favorite parts: "Across the horizon they paint the sky. / Atop the mountains a fiery glow."... "Vibrant colors so tense and true"... "May we meet again another night." Simple, yet wonderful imagery and heartfelt. Good work!

[My Broken Heart]

Than You So Much...... It was a beautiful sunset, the picture was one of about two hundred I took that evening, but that one I like the most. I am trying to regain my passion for writing and that night inspired me, as do all the wonderful comments like yours. Thank You again....

[ghostlyhearts]

What a lovely poem! You painted a brilliant picture with your words.

[My Broken Heart]

Thank You.... I tried to do the picture I took justice.

[Emily]

I loved it!
The title is just awesome!
Lovely wording!
Keep it up!

[My Broken Heart]

Wow.... Thank You....