Let Me Drowned

I'm just another druggy

sleeping in my cell

left alone to suffer

in my self created hell

Im the one to blame

hurting my family

and still I feel no shame

madness feels like home

and chaos keeps me calm

drugs they seem to go with the flow

making up for what I've lost

when in reality the are what forced the cost

They keep me high; make me fly

at the same time holding be down

I pretend to be oblivous

When I know I am about to drowned

yet I do it again play the fool

my mind, my soul they are the murder tool

I gave into my worst enemy

now I'm slowly killing myself

my family has no choice leaving me spiraling down

down this path I've been on so many times before

time after time they would forgive and forget

only until I did it again flooding with a sense of regret

Why do I keep hurting them

they only want the best

the best for their son

the best for their brother

yet here I am Just another druggy

in this place thats dark and sad

feeling all alone

I've lost everything I had

Reviews

[Homeschool]

You expressed the themes of self-abuse so well, articulately approaching the subjects with fresh and evocative ideas. The setting of a jail was a great method of symbolizing the claustrophobia and the inescapable characteristics of addiction.
A job well done. Bravo.

Cool. Nice perspective. Dry reality.

[TurtleClark]

this is very captivating and it draws you in to them spiraling down

[samurai212]

nice work :D

[CharlesMonroe]

This is really sad, but really beautiful. Good ob (: I love it

This isvery sad but very very good.
I like the flow of the lines
"madness feels like home and chaos keeps me calm"
talking about such disasterous things with such rythem and grace is difficult to do.
Wonderful peice, I plan to read more from you, I adore your writing style!!
(o:

[Jae]

very tragic. This is a great piece that makes the reader endure the same pain and emotion. I liike it!

~Rem