Why can't I hate you?

Why can't I hate you?

A Poem by I'llPlayTheJuliet
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You hurt me more then I could bare

yet I still wanted you there

Because you mean the world to me

I will not let you leave

with out me

 

I tried to forget you!

Why can't I forget you?

I tried to replace you!

Why can't I replace you?

I tried to hate you!

Why can't I hate you?

Because I love you.

 

I don't want this to be the end

you messed up but I have too

But you forgave me

and gave me a chance

now I want to do the same for you

but you dont want a second chance

you dont even want my friendship

 

I tried to forget you!

Why can't I forget you?

I tried to replace you!

Why can't I replace you?

I tried to hate you!

Why can't I hate you?

 

And so I'll wait right here

Until your ready to hear what I'm saying

I can't give up on you

I lost my mind when I didn't have you

So just accept I'm not going anywhere

I'll be here.

 

I tried to forget you!

Why can't I forget you?

I tried to replace you!

Why can't I replace you?

I tried to hate you!

Why can't I hate you?

© 2010 I'llPlayTheJuliet


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It´s amazing. I love the second verse and how it´s used throughout everything. You made it a desperation. Forgetting somebody is hard... but when you can´t forget someone due to the event of something horrible... it drives you crazy. I absolutely love it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I think FANTASTIC! :D and amazing and... other good wordes. Just great all around really.... Great write, you should continue to write lyrics, I could learn much from them,

Posted 14 Years Ago



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