How Can I live?

How can stay positive

when everything is falling apart?

How can I keep smiling

when I know it's not going to be alright?

How can I move on

when it means leaving you behind?

How can I keep looking up

when its pouring rain?

How can stop from hurting myself

when I know it will hurt you?

How can I stay sane

When I'm fading away?

How can I help you

When you don't want the help?

How can I fix everything I broke

when I can't even find the peices?

How can I live

when I know your dieing?

Author's Note

Please ignore grammer and spelling. >-<

Reviews

I adore how much emotion is in this piece.
You can feel what the writer feels!

[Adelia Alighieri]

There's such a contradiction in life - life is a contradiction in itself.

This pretty much reflects life.
Keep writing, well done!

[Akshat♥]

I really liked this poem....
this poem is so close to your heart..
i can see it..
sad good poem...
powerful message is came out of it...
nice work..thnx for sharing it:)

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SO sad! When I started reading this I thought it was going to be about someone losing the one they loved...as in a break up way though. The ending really got me! I love the little twist there. This poem is very short but you manage to get such a powerful message across. Great poem! :)

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

truly a poignant poetic pouring straight from the heart~

[Vin]

This is really good! I especially love "How can stay positive/ when everything is falling apart?" and "How can I keep looking up/ when its pouring rain?" such raw emotion in this piece. Very well done! Thanks for sharing.

-Beth