Just a Pawn

another possible lyric....

 
You and me, 
we always said these things.. 
best friends forever 
ill be there for you 
you'll be there for me 
you were my rock  
you were my stone 
but the past few months 
your true colors have  shone... 
Did it make you proud 
To make me fall down 
To make me relapse into my past 
yeah I blame you  
But its pretty clear why 
all along your 'trust' was lies 
Playing me against her  
and him against me 
To everyone else your games 
were clear to see 
they kept telling me how you drained me 
but I defended you and the way you treated me  
I was just fool,  
a small pawn in your game 
I never even matter expect maybe  
a challenge for you to pursue 
almost like you were slowly cutting 
each string to my parachute 
then laughing as I fell 
luckily all my wounds are acute 
and I realize now 
You'll always be you.

Reviews

[samurai212]

nice write

[ANSMOR]

That is DEEP stuff... there is no question that is it wonderfully written, liked some parts exceptionally well..especially i see the world the same way.
what i'd be more interested in knowing is if there was a REAL event or realisation triggering this verse

[Alicante lullaby]

wow..it hurts when friends do that..but you are lucky,you got it''he'll be he''

[ashley]

I love this poem. It's fantastic.
"almost like you were slowly cutting
each string to my parachute
then laughing as I fall"
Great image. (of course, "fall" should be "fell" but this was still so good!)

[Cody Wiggins]

Wow im really sorry if this happened to you i truly am. I truly enjoyed the poem i could feel so much emotion and i like that. Truly a work of art

[Phenomena]

wow this was so full of emotion. i really enjoyed this read this ought to be one of my faves;)

[Annie29]

'cutting each string to my parachute'
probably one of the greatest lines ever written,
just so you know (:

[Wunderlich]

I like the flow present throughout the piece. I really like the parachute imagery and concept. F*****g tops. Well done.