Better this way?

Better this way?

A Poem by I'llPlayTheJuliet
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I have no idea...

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Is It better this way?

Was it worth the heartbreak

Now you regret all the choices you made

Trying to savore the memories that fade

So tell me baby

Is It better this way?

© 2010 I'llPlayTheJuliet


Author's Note

I'llPlayTheJuliet
Short and nothing ive encontered.... But I thought it flowed nice...

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good job

Posted 13 Years Ago


Epic. Short. but good. Great job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Well it certainly does have a nice flow. The poem itself is short, sweet, and to the point, which works well. Guter Job, yo.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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