Darkness

                   

                                  

Darkness that surounds me in my dreams,

Can nobody hear my screams?

I scream in horror and in pain,

are you all just to ashamed?

To show me as I really am,

Someone who doesn't give a damn

what they all think,

when they hear me speak my pessimistic words,

they act as if I am a screetching bird.

Why can't you just except me for me?

Is it because I'm not the gleeming little angel,

you always wanted me to be,

But insted I am me the darkness Queen

you would be better off stop trying to understand me,

and help me when this darkness is pulling me down.

When the darkness seeps out of my dreams and into my very mind,

it follows me where ever I go, walking down the street,

the darkness comes creeping from the shadows,

to pull me deep inside it,

until I am screaming in horror and in pain,

But you never came.

In the dark I will remain,

  until my ending day.

 

Reviews

[Krista]

I can really relate to this. You must find the light in the darkness to get through. I know it might seem really hard to do that but you must find it somehow.I have yet to find it myself honestly. Do Not Give Up!

[Jae]

Dude the is freakishly epic!!!!! I love the darkness of it!!!
keep writing darling!!!!

[Fanciful Goddess]

beautiful..dark ..deep ..I like it!

[Boris Jonathan Novak]

Fricken' great work!! Thanks for sharing your talent!

[siri]

this poem is f*****g awesome! dark is good and you did dark very well! theoretically it is possible to littereally go insane from changing to dark and light so much so be careful haha : ) but then ur probably just as insane as i am right?

[We are young.]

:'( What!!!
This is so very sad, your getting so much better tho! Keep writing.