Dear Mason Raymond

It is dedicated to a hockey player who is currently playing for the Vancouver Canucks.

everyone once thought you were a diamond,
worthy to keep around in the Canucks.
You have done nothing,
but to prove us wrong.

The fans did travel from Richmond
paying big bucks
to watch a game that should be fascinating;
and yet your wrap around took a bit too long.

Mason Raymond,
please do not rely on luck.
you are the losing board battles king,
can you try to work out more and be strong?

I am as sad as a lemon,
because of your movement with the puck.
Wait till your brain finally has a bling
on how to play an effective game, then I will sing you a love song.

Author's Note

just for fun! :)
feel free to leave comments.

Reviews

[Laughing-Bear]

I am as sad as a lemon, I had to think about that! I believe I really like the concept I believe you were trying to get across.