Um this is not the frist chapter

read the title im just kinda brainstorming at the moment

He turn to me, his eyes gleming in the moonlight. A sound rang out in my head,Run it seemed to say.I tryed to turn away but the deep purple of his eyes compaled me to stay.He took a step toward me his midnight black hair blowing in the wind. i could smell the sweet scent of a predator.Run, this time the sound was louder,but i still couldnt move.He look up and down as if taking me in. When he look back at my face i could see the pure amusement in his eyes.

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i havent check my grammer yet cause it ruines my train of thought

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first (not frist)

He turn to me his eyes gleming in the moonlight. A voice shouted
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He turned to me, his eyes gleaming in the moonlight. A voice shouted

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