A Waste Of A Crush

True story for me.

We laughed and talked

We had it made

Then I saw you with her

And everything changed

Guess my hopeful crush

Was just a worthless waste

And you and me

Weren't meant to be

Reviews

[Graceful]

awww so sweat!

[PaperHearts]

Nice work! I think that a lot of people who read this will be able to relate to this. I liked the fact that you took something that was so clearly personal to you and wrote it in such a universal way, because as the reader, I felt like I could connect to the emotional side of the theme. I felt that the rhyming was a little bit awkward towards the end, and didn't flow as well as the first half of the poem, but overall, I thought that this was a short and sweet write. :)
~PaperHearts

[momo]

actually you never know..anyways great write!

[Short.Nerd]

I've had this happen before. It sucks!

Great job(: Its very truthful.