Noxious

Noxious

The world can go on, and forget me

But in my mind, I will always be remembered

Maybe not for the best

But for the statement I made

A simple hello

A strong I love you

And the world just brushed it away

Away from you

Away from them

Away from the toxins

But the couldn't stop the poison

Everyday is a new day

Is what I am told

By my fragile mind

But suddenly they all blend into one kind:

Noxious

Poisonous

Venomous

Dangerous

You and me, this inevitable US.

Make it stop!

Make it go away!

Make night turn into day!!

Say, say you love me alone

And you cannot go home

Without me there.

Say you cannot breathe when I am near

Say you feel the way I do.

Reviews

[K.C. Zbryk]

These words of longing reach out to the reader and make them listen to your plea. Its hard for me to imagine a person who has not had these feelings at one tome or another but you capture them with such skill and make the reader reflect on the time when we felt this way as well. You captured this so well. amazingly well done.

[Serenity]

its beautiful and full of longing and hope, i absolutly love it "You and me, this inevitable US." that is my favorite line, its so simple yet powerful. I just LOVE it!