Watching Love

I'm watching him on my screen

Just watching his world pass me by

I want to begin to lean

In and cry

For how his world just passes me by

And he knows nothing of mine

Except for what is on my mind

He knows he is right

Just as bright

AS the full moon in the night

SKY!

Oh---------------------

I'm watching him on my screen

Just watching his world pass me by

I want to see if he'll give me the simplest high

i walk to the edge of his room

Where nothing holds sight of whom

Calls himself Death, or Evil

No I beg to be civil

As I fall for him

He knows he can see me watching

Just can hear me screaming:

"I LOVE YOU!"

Screaming:

"I LOVE YOU!!"

Reviews

[Nocturnal Sunrise]

I really enjoyed reading this poem. Its almost addictive,full of raw anticipation and emotion. Great work!

[Chantel]

Dahh. I'm addicted to your writing. I haven't read anything so REAL as your poems in a long time. A lot of people are restricted, I think, myself included (I can't even seem to write anymore, really). But you, it seems, you just WRITE. And it's brilliant. So, once again, amazing job! :)

[ecept]

This is really good, like your style.

[dead man talking]

I love you, thats what my bertie says sometimes,likes poem alot thank you