The Darkness Is Warm

Love too eats me away

Love to me is the darkness

Lovely

Wondrous

Inviting...

You of all men I loved and miss

You of all mortal beings I wanted to kiss...

Now the darkness is cold without you.

Reviews

[Chantel]

This is amazing!! I know, third review in one day...seriously, though, this is good! Strangely, I get it, a lot better than a lot of poems actually. It's just kind of primal I guess....or maybe that's not the word....anyway, this is great, excellent job :)

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

Very sad and indeed strange, but I like it.

[Sarah]

It's very strange but its good well done:D

[Byn234]

Interesting visuals in such a short writing. I did stumble a bit on the first line, unable to make sense of whether it should read "Love to eat me away", "Love to me eats away" or "Love eats me away" ... Perhaps a slight revision could go there?