Purple & Pink

There's nothing wrong with a little colour

Fallen hues,
On a planet of fade.
The constant slip,
Of the dull cascade.

So much more could be sensed.
A wasted ability,
Limiting our choice,
Of what we could always see.

When the greyness encloses,
You can still think,
To craft an internal world,
Made of purple and pink.         

Reviews

[Simone]

Haha- my two least favorite colours ^_^
Seriousely though, this poem speaks true. I can see where you are comming from and I agree.
Great poem- and a little colour is great!

[Star Shyne]

This is a great poem. It uses many fancy words! i like fancy words =) good job.

[The Creator's Little Ro..]

This is really pretty! It flows nicely, and the topic is not cliche. I love how it creates a world in only 12 short lines. Very nice job. =]