Of Human Attraction

The most powerful human compulsion.

I can feel it at night,
Within my quiet mind.
An invisible force,
That calls out for my own kind.

In my dream, we were both the master,
And both the slave.
We each received,
And we each gave.

My body belongs to you,
For as long as I say,
And so you may use it,
In any which way.

To make a human happy,
There is no greater joy,
And for that I'll let myself,
Be someone else's toy.

To be wanted by someone,
There is no greater way to feel.
I'd give anything just for a taste.
All that matters is that it's real.

Both looking together,
But we don't see the same.
I can see a picture,
While you don't see past the frame.

Reviews

[The Wave]

the last stanza i absolutely loved...
"both looking together, but we don't see the same. i can see a picture, while you don't see past the frame."
thought that was soooo clever.

but as far as the poem as a whole, well i dont like your concept of thinking that there is no greater joy than physical pleasure. even though i didn't like the topic, i can't deny your a good writer.