This Is Just To Say

Following the style of William Carlos William's poem.

This is just to say

I have picked

A rose

From your garden,

 

The one

You were probably

Saving

For your girlfriend.

 

Forgive me.

It was beautiful

So red

And so delicate.

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

There is a gentleness to your form and flow, and yet it seems layered as well with a depth of meaning and expression. Love how this spoke so fluidly!

[Caleb Pendleton]

keep it simple, keep it simple, keep it simple. nobody needs to tell you that now do they? nice use of narration to paint an image infused with the emotions of a fuller story we'd all like to know.

[Ahren]

Wow. I mean, wow. That's some pretty freaking amazing writing.
I really like the title a lot. I really like the second stanza. (Hopefully I didn't misuse that word or I would sound really stupid.) Write more! Write more! :)