Death Won't Keep Us Apart

Death is total darkness..But for someone you love there are some who would wait and stay in that darkness till they can be together again,eternally.Maybe its not right but LOVE can be unreasonable.

To be with you forever

'Til its lights out.

'Til the curtains closing

'Til it's time for our Adios!

To be with you forever,

From day to night

From hello to goodbye

From the first page to the last.

To be with you forever,

To see the sunlight turns to moonlight,

To see through black and white

To see even with the absence of light.

To be with you forever,

Lay down to where you are.

Be your heartbeat when you stop breathing.

To keep the light while you're asleep.

In this temporary goodbye,I'll wait.

'Til its time to say hello again.

'Til your eyes you kept close will open to mine.

To be with you forever,

In this darkness, I'll stay.

'Cause even death cant keep us apart...forever.

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Huyana,
How lovely is "Death Won't Keep Us Apart."
From the first line;
"To be with you forever till it's lights out..to..curtains closing..and Adios."
The meaning illustrated with light and dark and with emotion of eternity not being the barrier is so full of hope!
"To be with you forever. To see the sunlight turns to moonlight, To see through black and white, To see even with the absence of light."
I found this poem to be one of inner reality taking on strength and becoming outwardly declared.
Loved it!
I hope you keep writing, as you have a voice that is vital and inspiring.
Bless you.
Kathy

[Country boy183798]

A beautiful poem that truly captures the emotion. Well done and keep on writing!

[Shabeeh Haider]

A beautiful love poem. The lines that you have used and the examples that you have given about being together forever are absolutely wonderful.
I loved this line: " Be your heartbeat when you stop breathing.
To keep the light while you're asleep."

[Huyana]

Thank you for appreciating, Shabeeh. I'm a newbie here and I still dont know how everything works but your reviews are encouraging me to continue. :)

[Shabeeh Haider]

I'm new here as well. But it's fun reading good poetry. Keep writing