...become what he should be

Last two lines were added and so the title changed.

Is a man the sum total of all he has thought, said and done…

Is there any goodness in his thoughts, his words and his deeds?

If weighed in the balance of equity would he be found wanting?

What man is stronger than his greatest weakness.

Can a man gather sufficient courage to besiege his fear

and in so doing overcome and walk in liberty.  

Would a man be contented in being all he wanted to be

Or would he prefer to discover that he had become what he should be.

Reviews

[Onlyme]

Great poem Huw, interesting thoughts to ponder and think over. In this write.

[Huw]

The last two lines were added and so the title changed.