Monochrome rainbow

What you see

is what you get

she boasted

That shallow? 

I thought

she was right

and so it was

pointless 

scratching

the surface

as there was

nothing below.

no pot of gold

at the end of her 

monochrome

rainbow

Reviews

[Huw]

EINFARBIG REGENBOGEN.

was Sie sehen
ist das, was man bekommt
sie prahlte
Das flache?
ich dachte
Sie hatte recht
und so war ich
zwecklos
Kratzen
die Oberfläche
wie es war
nichts weiter unten.
kein Topf mit Gold
am Ende ihres
einfarbig
Regenbogen

[terry smith]

This is really good Huw!...

[Huw]

Thanks terry pleased you understood it. I've been reading your work on addiction and I feel the need to get back to it. In the mean time do you mind me asking if you are aware of what the root meaning of addiction is? Modern dictionaries seem to have left it out.