Tiny Raindrops

the perfect world

on a windy day atop a peaceful mountain

i fell asleep beneath a mighty hickory tree

 

with a breeze for music and clouds for chariots

my dreams so gently spirited me near and far

 

i felt so at ease with a presence so warm and consoling

peaceful voices were whispering like the wind

 

there was no time or space.....just sincere peace

i awoke with tiny raindrops so gently touching my face

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Blissful serenity described in such lovely words. The imagery is tangible. Loved it. Lydi**

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Thank you Lydia! I love your writing and it fills my mind with ideas on how to improve my writing!

[Aaron Jinks]

I really loved this. The descriptions were great and the mood was wonderful. Good job. :)

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Many thanks Aaron! I needed that!

[Niall Madden]

you really do describe everything in this poem in a way which makes it seem perfect, next time I would like to see more it would be great :)

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Thanks Niall! I'll try and write more. I have these incredible experiences and wake up early one morning with the sudden urge to jot them down on paper. I'll keep trying to improve. Thanks for your inspiration!