Sophrosyne

Sophrosyne

A Poem by HummingMaster
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“Simplicity is the ultimate sophistication.”- Leonardo Da Vinci

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My happiness lies where my heart is not in disguise 
it is where the mask falls off and my naked soul is free 
it is where I break down and become revealed. 

I only see the eyes;
those are more beautiful than the sun on its rise,
I ask me how can I be happy when we are untwined 
when the fate that I drew in my head is no more
when you are the rose and I am the bee. God.  
I love you but you don’t love me…

now I think you were just a phase 
a part from my life that left me amazed 
you made my life a living maze
then you said no and kept my heart in a blaze
wondering what is left of love for me to taste… 
Nothing. just boredom and heartache.

with you my best smiles were cracked into existence
with no resistance from my heart and brain
thats why i will never forget the time we had 
just like birds will never forget the amazing sunny days.

So I will embrace the haze in my life until it washes away with the rain
I’ll even write songs about it so it’ll never get to me again
Now my heart is in sync with my brain and ready to move out from the pain.

© 2016 HummingMaster


Author's Note

HummingMaster
It's about the journey to become Sophrosyne; an ancient Greek concept of an ideal of excellence of character and soundness of mind

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Amazing poetry.
"I only see the eyes;
those are more beautiful than the sun on its rise,"
The above lines were my favorite. I liked the description. You described need and want with skill and passion. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

HummingMaster

8 Years Ago

Thanks for reading! :D
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

You are welcome.



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I never heard of Sophrosyne dear poet thanks for the education.
This is good - I dont like it as much as 'Your smile -> My High' but it does have its moments for me.
The final stanza is class!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amazing poetry.
"I only see the eyes;
those are more beautiful than the sun on its rise,"
The above lines were my favorite. I liked the description. You described need and want with skill and passion. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

HummingMaster

8 Years Ago

Thanks for reading! :D
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

You are welcome.

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Added on January 7, 2016
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Tags: poetry, greek, Sophrosyne, balanced, temperance

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