Your Smile -> My High

Your Smile -> My High

A Poem by HummingMaster
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"You're never fully dressed without a smile" - Sia

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I was born talented 
I won't hide it anymore 

I am not the best surly not at all 
All I want is to be your best, that's all 

I like to touch your soul
It makes me happy and smile even more 

I like to see you touched by my words
Some think it's magic, some say it's from my soul

Each poem I write has a piece of me buried inside 
Each time I re-read it, memories flee back like a water fall 

I always wanted to be happy 
Never did imagine making others happy is what makes me crave for more 

My story is simple 
I fell in and out of the love-war 
Made it back alive, came back just a little soar 

you asked me if I liked it 
I’ll say “I wouldn’t mind doing it once more"


 

© 2016 HummingMaster


Author's Note

HummingMaster
Smile today... :) :D

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Very nice use of words and thoughts.
"My story is simple
I fell in and out of the love-war
Made it back alive, came back just a little soar "
The above lines were perfect. I liked the flow of thoughts leading to the very good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

HummingMaster

9 Years Ago

Thanks, glad you liked it :)
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

I did and you are welcome.



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A very happy piece
so lovely the way it flows
like the perfect day

Love it

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

HummingMaster

8 Years Ago

Thanks for the review! Glad you liked it :D
I liked this very much Ghaith. From the title (which grabbed my attention) to the final line. An excellent love poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

HummingMaster

8 Years Ago

I'm glad you liked it :D Thanks for your review!
Very nice use of words and thoughts.
"My story is simple
I fell in and out of the love-war
Made it back alive, came back just a little soar "
The above lines were perfect. I liked the flow of thoughts leading to the very good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

HummingMaster

9 Years Ago

Thanks, glad you liked it :)
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

I did and you are welcome.

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Added on October 4, 2015
Last Updated on October 30, 2016
Tags: Happy, Poetry, Love

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HummingMaster
HummingMaster

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