Show Her Or Live With What May

Show Her Or Live With What May

A Poem by HummingMaster
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Everyone should fight for love even if it's from one side

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Many come and go while few stay
I want you to be that one 
the one that could make my tears go away 
or make me cry a river just by leaving with no trail
I’d take a chance on you rather than let it burn as hay

People said I lost my way
lost the path, went astray 
all because I liked you more than they
liked you in a way, not many can say

I believed a lie 
a lie that told me love is not in the eye
but how come can I read your mind
read your every thought through those indescribable heavenly eyes

I hope your every dream, every wish comes true
even when I know it’s not about me and you
that’s only a fraction of what I would do
A fraction meant to show you that me think of you 

I was told our worlds differ in so many ways
but I stayed true to me and told them to go screw it some other place.

 

© 2015 HummingMaster


Author's Note

HummingMaster
This one is a bit complicated from my side, it's what I am feeling now but afraid to say, it's what I want to show but something keeps telling me not to,

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Fighting with passion for a love that is 'one-sided' can leave the person in love in a very vulnerable position indeed in these times - open to more than ridicule !!
But Im with you in believing that 'faint heart never won fair lady' and we need to be steadfast and let her know and only then, if she spurns our advances, can we look ourselves in the mirror and say I tried with my all, to win her heart.'
You are a true romantic soul Ghaith.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

HummingMaster

8 Years Ago

Thank! appreciate the review :) glad you liked it



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Fighting with passion for a love that is 'one-sided' can leave the person in love in a very vulnerable position indeed in these times - open to more than ridicule !!
But Im with you in believing that 'faint heart never won fair lady' and we need to be steadfast and let her know and only then, if she spurns our advances, can we look ourselves in the mirror and say I tried with my all, to win her heart.'
You are a true romantic soul Ghaith.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

HummingMaster

8 Years Ago

Thank! appreciate the review :) glad you liked it
Romantic piece but a lil heartbreaking.
Very emotional wrote this one straight from your heart i see.
I enjoyed reading it none the less.
Always keep writing.
As a true poet needs to write as they often cant say.


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

HummingMaster

9 Years Ago

Thanks for your review :D.
Your words are true "As a true poet needs to write as they often c.. read more
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cimmy wuv xxxooo

9 Years Ago

You are more than welcome :)
I really like it:) Good job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

HummingMaster

9 Years Ago

Thank you for taking the time to read it, I'm glad that you liked it :)
Awesome. The rhyming is very good. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

HummingMaster

9 Years Ago

Thanks for taking the time to read it :D
Love is worth the sacrifice and the risk. Your words are very sentimental and lovely. So glad I have visited and enjoyed this write....:).....

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

HummingMaster

9 Years Ago

Thanks Very much Glad you enjoyed it :D
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

You are welcome. ...:)...........
Yep, sometimes you just have to love anyway and stay true to yourself.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

HummingMaster

9 Years Ago

Thats exactly what I thought and Thank you very much for taking the time to read it

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Added on June 8, 2015
Last Updated on October 15, 2015
Tags: Hope, Love, Standing up, Romance, poem, poetry

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Amman, Jordan



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